उलझनें


Kal tak meri adatein pasand thi, 
Aaj unhi se sari pareshaniyan hai tumhe .

Laton mein uljhi ungliyon ko suljhatei na thakte thei kabhi , 

aaj latein hi uljhanei hein un ungliyon ke liye … “Nivedita”


कल तक मेरी आदतें पसंद थी , आज उनसे ही सारी परेशानियाँ  हैं तुम्हें ..

जिन लटों में उलझी उँगलियों को सुलझाते न थकते थे कभी 

आज वो लटें ही उलझनें हैं उन उँगलियों के लिए ।.. “निवेदिता”

40 responses to “उलझनें”

  1. So deep and very beautiful.

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    1. thank you Nisthurji , after a long time …. Thanks for reading and praising 🙂

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      1. My pleasure to appreciate you for your work and as person as well.

        Thanks for giving me opportunity to feel good after appreciating you.

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        1. Thank you Nisthur ji , It is sheer pleasure

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          1. It’s mutual I believe

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              1. hi

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  2. Beautiful…. time can even erode love…

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    1. Yes true Mani , I have been hearing and seeing this around me ..

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    2. Mani please see my post “following you” as i have written a photo story as you
      Wanted me to write something on Shillong 🙂 though a lot more to come journey to Shillong has begin just now once again .. 🙂

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      1. Great…can you please share the link? I’m eager to read it… 🙂

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    1. Thanks a tonne Pranav for visiting:)

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  3. lovely nivedita. in two lines you told the story of an aging relationship. 🙂

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    1. Thank you Nitin for the praise .. Glad you liked 🙂

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  4. वाह! बहुत खूब, निवेदिता! …ऐसी उलझनें तेरी जिंदगी में कभी न आयें! 🙂

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    1. प्रणाम आप बड़ों के आशीर्वाद से कभी नहीं आएँगे .. 🙂

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          1. I think that little icon says: gif, gif. But all I am getting is a small rectangle with those words. But much Appreciated, my Dear Nivedita! 🙂

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            1. Hath jodkar pranam , the icon ..

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              1. Thank You! That is Lovely! Blessings, my Dear, and Love. 🙂

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                1. 🙂 thank yu reagards

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    1. yes , and Thanks for stopping by ..

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      1. Always Welcome 🙂

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  5. Wow it’s like ur describing a usual married life in ur own artistic way. N how did you edited the pics with hindi poem on it. It’s amazing

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    1. Thank you Swapnil, your words of appreciation always brings smile on my face :). Its easy use any photo editor app , and write the text on it ..:)

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      1. Itana accha nahi hota..trust me

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  6. क्या बात है बहुत खूब

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  7. बहुत खूब!

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  8. It usually happens that monotony takes over in relationships. And when relationships become that way, everything that the other hand loved turns blue. Sad story of relationships.
    There are things, however that we could do to avoid this.
    Nice one , girl. 🙂 A painful thought though

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