Jyotsna “Nivedita”

 न राग न झंकार , 

शब्दों की चित्रकार हूँ 

भावों की अभिव्यक्ति हूँ ,

न कवी न कलाकार हूँ। 

नारी हूँ सबल हूँ ,

सशक्त हूँ कोमल हूँ ,

स्त्रोत हूँ  उद्गम का ,

खुशियों  का संसार हूँ  ,

ममता भरी छांव हूँ ,

वृद्धि का  पसार हूँ ,

तारों की शीतलता ,

सूर्य का तेज हूँ , तो 

चंद्र की “ज्योत्स्ना “हूँ मैं। 

क्रोध के प्रतियुत्तर में ,

ज्वाला और ताप हूँ ,

वहीँ वेदना में निवेदित ,

विनम्र “निवेदिता”1461531118126 हूँ में।

I am, a Womanwho also can express  herself in simple words by writing , sketching or painting ,packing  , photography ,

a Woman ..who is a mother ,a daughter ,a wife leading her Life towards progress and happiness .

In me, there is a reflection of a collage of so many emotions..

I am strong,

 I am weak , 

I am aggressive,

 I am polite , 

I am  beautiful

but my tears are ugly

I am love 

I am hatred

I am progress

I am urge and tender

as I am “NIVEDITA”(one who plea)( my pen name)

I am cold as Moonlight 

as I am “Jyotsna “

I am , want to be …..




63 thoughts on “Jyotsna “Nivedita”

  1. Nice intro Nivedita……yes words written are the perfect medium of expression of a myriad of feelings………love the way you use both Hindi and English to express…………thanks for visiting my blog…..:)

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      1. The pleasure is all mine. You are a positive force for many new bloggers like me and perfectly resonate with the words sunshine & lovely…I wish you all the best Jyotsana:-)


        1. kya bol rahe ho ?? you are insane , you are anytime a wonderful writer , a Doctor a writer a painter an allrounder , serving mankind and inspiring the youth through writing .. Amazing you are . I come no where nearby your writing ,,n thanks for the wishes . I wish you the same Happy Navaratri to you and your family 🙂

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  2. Hello Jyotsana,

    Some way of introducing yourself to the world through a bilingual poem. It is very beautiful to see and read. Thank you for the follow on my blog. And oh, your blog’s tagline is killer too. Happy blogging, God bless. 🙂

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    1. Hey Hi, Thanks for the kind words .I am glad you liked the names 🙂 and the tag line.:) Its a pleasure to read a wonderful writer and to have him on the blog. Happy Blogging to you too..:) stay blessed 🙂

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                    1. sukhi jeewan ka falsafa hai .. aisi udaan mat bhar jahan se gire par par toot jayein .. 🙂 baas jiyej rahi hun sach man kar 🙂 above all day by day getting older better to keep the feet firm on Earth .. samjhe I am humbled by your humility ..

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                    2. Maardala 😉
                      Getting older is an ornament only the lucky can carry. And you carry it beautifully. Your words are like the grace of the morning sun and a sweet lullaby at the same time. 🙂

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  3. Your new theme and the background looks beautiful. Syncs well with the kind of content you have on your blog. The first picture of a muddy road amidst the forest trees- psychedelic trance for me.
    And now when I came to this page… a typewriter . It just got awesome. I have an uncanny obsession with type writers.
    Once again. Awesome theme, just like you 😉 :*

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    1. Thank you Sonu , you have praised like i have designed the theme, I just chose a theme no efforts of mine , but thank you for the lovely words. You are very kind ,encouraging and good ofcourse.

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