Jyotsna “Nivedita”

 न राग न झंकार , 

शब्दों की चित्रकार हूँ 

भावों की अभिव्यक्ति हूँ ,

न कवी न कलाकार हूँ। 

नारी हूँ सबल हूँ ,

सशक्त हूँ कोमल हूँ ,

स्त्रोत हूँ  उद्गम का ,

खुशियों  का संसार हूँ  ,

ममता भरी छांव हूँ ,

वृद्धि का  पसार हूँ ,

तारों की शीतलता ,

सूर्य का तेज हूँ , तो 

चंद्र की “ज्योत्स्ना “हूँ मैं। 

क्रोध के प्रतियुत्तर में ,

ज्वाला और ताप हूँ ,

वहीँ वेदना में निवेदित ,

विनम्र “निवेदिता”1461531118126 हूँ में।

I am, a Womanwho also can express  herself in simple words by writing , sketching or painting ,packing  , photography ,

a Woman ..who is a mother ,a daughter ,a wife leading her Life towards progress and happiness .

In me, there is a reflection of a collage of so many emotions..

I am strong,

 I am weak , 

I am aggressive,

 I am polite , 

I am  beautiful

but my tears are ugly

I am love 

I am hatred

I am progress

I am urge and tender

as I am “NIVEDITA”(one who plea)( my pen name)

I am cold as Moonlight 

as I am “Jyotsna “

I am , want to be …..

 

 

 

63 responses to “Jyotsna “Nivedita””

  1. Nice intro Nivedita……yes words written are the perfect medium of expression of a myriad of feelings………love the way you use both Hindi and English to express…………thanks for visiting my blog…..:)

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    1. Hey Anindya halo 🙂 do you know you visited my blog on 6th March and complimented me for the same “Nivedita” and again

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  2. Thank you Nivedita for visiting my blog. I am so glad we met. Hope we meet again!
    Happy Blogging.

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    1. We will regularly meet , it is a pleasure 🙂

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  3. Nice to go through your blog….following it…..:)…..hope to see you sometimes in my blog musicalsoundscapes too….:)

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    1. Thanks a lot will surely follow your blog and read the posts very soon 🙂

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  4. Ma’am, the tagline of your blog is just simply splendid. ❤

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    1. Very kind of you अnanया , overwhelmed by your appreciation 😊 thank you

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  5. Hey! Congratulations…I have nominated you for ‘One lovely blog award’ & ‘Sunshine blogger award’. Kindly visit the following link for more information @ https://doc2poet.wordpress.com/2016/09/30/sunshine-blogger-award/ . Thank you 🙂

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    1. hey Thank you so much dear , I am delighted 🙂

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      1. The pleasure is all mine. You are a positive force for many new bloggers like me and perfectly resonate with the words sunshine & lovely…I wish you all the best Jyotsana:-)

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        1. kya bol rahe ho ?? you are insane , you are anytime a wonderful writer , a Doctor a writer a painter an allrounder , serving mankind and inspiring the youth through writing .. Amazing you are . I come no where nearby your writing ,,n thanks for the wishes . I wish you the same Happy Navaratri to you and your family 🙂

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          1. Your words motivate me to do better… happy navratri 😊

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            1. The feel is mutual Amit

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                  1. Hey! I am good…jst a little busy these days…wish you a happy and green diwali…my best wishes 🙂

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                    1. Hey thanks , and wish the same to you and your family :):)

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  6. Hello Jyotsana,

    Some way of introducing yourself to the world through a bilingual poem. It is very beautiful to see and read. Thank you for the follow on my blog. And oh, your blog’s tagline is killer too. Happy blogging, God bless. 🙂

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    1. Hey Hi, Thanks for the kind words .I am glad you liked the names 🙂 and the tag line.:) Its a pleasure to read a wonderful writer and to have him on the blog. Happy Blogging to you too..:) stay blessed 🙂

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    1. :):) सहर्ष धन्यवाद

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  7. Thank you very much for stopping by 🙂 I appreciate it very much 🙂

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    1. My pleasure, keep sharing:)

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  8. My Dear Nivedita, Please put Your name in this page. Love and Blessings. 🙂

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    1. swamiji regards , I have written my name and about me , thank you for the guidance , regards ..:)

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  9. Thank you, for following me again 😛

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    1. Oye I never unfollowed it was by mistake:) hey help me how to put that smile logo .. Plz

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      1. Haha. I knew. I was just pulling your legs.
        Just download the image and add it as featured image to your post 🙂

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    2. how to copy the logo and the title plz help

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      1. Im so sorry. Been away for a while.
        First, download the image. Then, on your left side while you are writing the post, you’d see a featured image option, add it there.

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        1. Okay in a while I will try and check your email dude 🙂

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          1. I’ve got nothing on my email 😀 Which email are you talking about , girl 😉

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            1. Let me check and restart all

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              1. I’ve already send you a mail. 🙂

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                  1. Great. Finally 😀

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                    1. Now try posting comment as well

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                    2. And I can’t thank you enough now. You are a Beaaaautttiiiiffuuull woman :*

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                    3. 🙂 flattering

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                    4. How do I have you believe ? 😛

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                    5. mein dharatal par hi theek hun 🙂

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                    6. :p If you say so 😉

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                    7. sukhi jeewan ka falsafa hai .. aisi udaan mat bhar jahan se gire par par toot jayein .. 🙂 baas jiyej rahi hun sach man kar 🙂 above all day by day getting older better to keep the feet firm on Earth .. samjhe I am humbled by your humility ..

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                    8. Maardala 😉
                      Getting older is an ornament only the lucky can carry. And you carry it beautifully. Your words are like the grace of the morning sun and a sweet lullaby at the same time. 🙂

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  10. Your new theme and the background looks beautiful. Syncs well with the kind of content you have on your blog. The first picture of a muddy road amidst the forest trees- psychedelic trance for me.
    And now when I came to this page… a typewriter . It just got awesome. I have an uncanny obsession with type writers.
    Once again. Awesome theme, just like you 😉 :*

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    1. Thank you Sonu , you have praised like i have designed the theme, I just chose a theme no efforts of mine , but thank you for the lovely words. You are very kind ,encouraging and good ofcourse.

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      1. 😀 I was just praising your taste. I won’t be surprised even if you designed it 😛
        Thank you, Nivedita. My expressions from within 😉

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        1. Hehehe .. Thank you thank you even for the exaggeration

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          1. Lol…. You’re such a kid 😛 😀 😉

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            1. Correction! Mother of a kid 🙂

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              1. Ohoo. 😀 Mother of a kid with charm. Howzaat?

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  11. :):) got not words to express about me .. 😉

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  12. I guess, you forgot to edit this page 😀

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