चाह नयी 

हज़ारों वर्षों से जमी बर्फ़ सी ,

कठोर अवस्र्द्ध मेरा हृदय ,

मन मस्तिष्क के साथ ,

जमी हुईं सी हड्डियां भी ..

किंतु धमनियों के भीतर,

बहता ख़ून अब भी गर्म है ,

जड़ीकृत शिरा में दौड़ती ,

रवानी महसूस करा रही है ,

खोखल शरीर ,ख़ुश्क त्वचा ,

में मानो प्रकाश पुंज अब भी,

पूर्ण जीवंत – खिलने को है ।

लेकिन छाया में कहीं छिप गए,

आत्ममता में उल्लिखित,

मेरे दिल के अंदर वो भाव फिर,

उग आए हैं , बढ़ने -फूलने को हैं,

बंजर ज़मीन में वो सफ़ेद फूल ,

सूखे ठूँठ की रूँख में नन्ही क़ोंपल

मानो नई कलियाँ खिलने को हैं 

बाग़ीचा फिरसे महकने को है । “निवेदिता”


27 responses to “चाह नयी ”

  1. People see the scenic beauty in your words I am awestruck with the ray of optimism you’ve worked upon in this poem.

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    1. Thank you Dheer for motivating me so much, I am also trying to write again may be this inspiration will help

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      1. I also want you to write again, be yourself again, that’s why I re read your blogs, felt the mesmerizing magic once again and wish some fresh magic to be spelled out of your pen.

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        1. Kindly start .. let’s start all together .. you me and Raman

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          1. Main to ab buddha ho gaya hoon, kuch saalon baad main porn likhna shuru karunga ;-P
            Jokes apart, I have been urging you both to write, let yourselves flow.

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            1. We will love to read whatever you will write. Even that will be expressed beautifully I know 🙂🙏

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              1. Hahaha that was just a joke

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  2. बहुत ख़ूब ! But some words very very difficult ! A suggestion ! Please put the meaning of difficult words in English !

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    1. I will take care in future and thanks for reading n liking the post

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  3. खोखल शरीर ,ख़ुश्क त्वचा ,

    में मानो प्रकाश पुंज अब भी,

    पूर्ण जीवंत – खिलने को है ।
    kya khub likha hai…….jindagi shayad esi kaa naam hai…..
    kabhi man kahta hai….bas ab nahi…….
    phir koyee hawa ka jhonka aata hai purani yaadon ko patte ke saman uda le jaata hai aur nayee patton ka srijan kar mushkurane par bibas kar deta hai.

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    1. Kitna sundar vyakhyan kiya hai apne :):)

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      1. सुक्रिया आपका।

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  4. Bagicha bhi mehkega aur kaliyan bhi khilenge.. ummid hai to sab hai.. beautiful one

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  5. Tum bahut sundar leekhti ho….

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    1. Writers like you all are inspirations here

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          1. I think there is no tax on haha….So without need haha…

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            1. Hahahahaha 🙏🏻😂😂😂

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  6. It’s beautiful…

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    1. 🙂Thank you :):) very much

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  7. पहाड़ की खूसूरत वादियों में पैदा हो बड़े हुए ही,
    ऐसा वर्णन कर सकते हैं ज्योत्सनाजी.
    वाकई बहुत खूब लिखा आपने…

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  8. Wow so thoughtful writing. I never read beautiful poem like this. 👌👌👌📷📷💞

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    1. Thats so lovely to know .. I am overwhelmed :):) thank u dear 🙂

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