छलिया

छलिया

मैं मीरा बन तड़प रही ,

वो गोपियों संग रचाए रास,

दूर बसी क्यूँ मीरा भाए ?

जब रहते राधा के पास ;

 मैं प्रेम में जोगन बनी , 

उनके मन को गोपी ही भाए ।

 मैं उनका नाम रटते नहीं थकती , 

उनको मेरा नाम नहीं भाए । 

पूजूँ नित प्रातःनिशि मध्याह्न , पर कान्हा तो रहा छलियासिर्फ़ दूसरों का ही रहता ध्यान ।। “निवेदिता”..

38 responses to “छलिया”

  1. Bahut hi sundar aur aap sab bahut hi achha likhte hain…
    Hum jese naye logon ko bhi sahyog or hosla afjayi kar dijiye
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    Thanks

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    1. Ji padharne ka shukriya Jo mujhse ban padega jaruri karungi .. likhe rahein 🙂

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      1. Shukriya apke sahyog ki jarurat

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        1. 🙂👍all the best

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  2. Bhagwan k prem Mei pdkar aisi bhakti bemisaal hai !
    Bhut pyare tarike SE apne kanhaiya SE apni shikayaten ki Hain 😀

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  3. Bahut hi sundar…you’ve expressed the feelings so naturally…full of grief yet she yearns for him… 🙂

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    1. Thank you 🙂 🙂 He is mean 😀.. I am left with only option “yearn to earn ” 🙂

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  4. छलिया तो मनमोहने का काम ही करते है. मीरा ,राधा , हो या गोपी.

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  5. तमाम उलझनों का साथ है….

    साहब

    कौन कहता है हम अकेले हैं….

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    1. Bilkul sahi kaha ..

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  6. I liked it , although concept is old but you distinguished it well …

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  7. Waah….umda rachna..👌👌👌

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    1. Shukriya apke comment ka toh mujhe intezaar rehti hai . Parantu satya yeh hai ki aaj ki Rachana mein kahin toh kuch kami Rahi hai

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      1. सभी रचनाएं एक समान नही होती।कमी तो चाँद में भी है।सभी रचनाएं अपने आप मे पूर्ण होती हैं साथ ही बहुत अच्छी रचनाएं भी देखा जाए तो अपूर्ण हो सकती है।अतः आपका ये रचना बहुत अच्छा है।

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    1. Sharat Ji padhne aur sarahne wale ke liye abhaar .

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  8. waah bahut khoob bhakti ras se sarabor hai ye kavita

    ugene paanv kabhi niklo to jaano. Makhmali fars par #garmi ka andaaz kabhi hota nahi #shair

    Hothon par gila ankhon me tabassum rakhna, Uff tauba tera haal e shikasta guftagu karna.

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    1. वाह बहुत khooob ..

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  9. बह क्या ख़ूब

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    1. धन्यवाद dhanyawaad

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      1. I have nominated you for The Versatile Blogger Award and I have tagged You

        https://clicksbysiba.wordpress.com/2017/07/28/the-versatile-blogger-award/

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  10. awesome hindi love poetry Jyotsnaa ji

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      1. ye namkaran kafi alag sa kar diya aapne ji ise publish bina kiya jawab dijiye mujhe samjh nahi aaya ji

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        1. Nam mujhe pata nahin , aur bina nam ke Ji lagaya ..

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                1. Good morning and good day 😉

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  11. Bahot badhiya tarike se prem aur prem ki vyatha ko vyakt kiya hai, magar aapke usual standards se halki si kam hai.

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    1. Yes you are right .. I myself felt so .. kahin shayad Prem mein kami Rahi hai ..

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      1. Nahi shabdon ke gathjod mein kuch kami si hai

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