गाँव की वो डोली 

वो छतों की डोलियाँ जिन्हें फलंगते थे कभी पतंग लूटने को .. वो गलियाँ आज सूनी पड़ी हैं , बस बची हैं वो बारियाँ वो किवाड़, वो लोह लक्कड़ .. सब घरों में दुबकें हैं TV कम्प्यूटर , whatsap , खेल भी indoors खेलने वाले भी IN doors..

वो कटुक नीम की निम्बोरी , वो मंझों में उलझे तार , वो सहेलियां, सायकिलों की घंटियाँ लगाती आपस में होड़ , वो भगवाँ झंडा मंदिर की प्रभात फेरी , वो झाँझ की आवाज़ , वो कूकती कोयल और वो बोलते मोर , और सबके हम बीच फलाँगते डोलियाँ .. आज सब यादें हैं और हैं बस सन्नाटा

37 responses to “गाँव की वो डोली ”

  1. खो गए वो मंज़र, खो गयीं वो अठखेलियां, खो गयीं वो गलियां, खो गया वो बचपन
    और संग ही खो गयी वो निश्छल मासूमियत।

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    1. सच है सब खो गया । सब इतना मिलगया है कि जो था वो खो गया ..

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      1. मिला है या मिलने का भ्रम है, हम शायद ये भी नहीं समझ पाए हैं, क्या इस मिलने के बाद भी पहले से सुकून है?

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  2. Beautifully penned !!

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    1. Am so so glad you liked it Jyo , thank you for stopping by 🙂

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  3. आप तो पूरा का पूरा गांव ही ला दी

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    1. gaon ka poora chitran kar diya aapne waah bahut khobb

      http://ow.ly/MS5630bXDpE

      #Anjam e ishq se beparwah #aaaghaz e ishq hua karte hai. Shabnami sham tale Aftab e hushn ki khatir kayi suraj jala karte hai #shair
      ye raat ek jawaab ki talabgaar lagti hai .#anjam e ishq se beparwaah #aaaghaz e ulfat par aitbaar karti hai #shair
      dil ke aaina e aks me jab bhi tumko dekha . #aaaghaz e ishq ko raqs karte dekha #shair
      ye zauq e ashiquie ko bas shayari na samajh. goya #anjam wafa ki parwwah karta to #aaaghaz e mohabbat hi na karta #shair
      Khayaal e #kaifiyat ki khatir. Wasl ki raat ko abaad kiya tere khwaabon ki khatir #shair
      Har raat ka ek muqammal falsafa raha. Justaju e wisaal e yaar #kaifiyat e mujassima raha #shair
      Ishq e #kaifiyat ne samhaal e rakha . Goya kitne mauj e baarishon me na bheege hoge hum #shair
      #kaifiyat e ishq me na gunaah ho jaaye. Jigar me deeda e chaand ki chahat. Ru ba ru e khu na chaand kahin mil jaye #shair

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      1. Wah kya khoob 🙏

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  4. Well written. The realities of life!

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  5. bahut badhiya collection hai apke blog me jo humari bharteeyta ko pradarsit karta hai, mujhe apka blog bahut achha laga khaaskar poems ka best of luck keep rocking mera bhi ek chhota sa blog hai ummeed hai viewers ko pasand aayega dhanyawaad link http://www.pushpendradwivedi.com/

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    1. Your tags doesn’t work 😦

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      1. Aisa kyu ?
        Sorry dear friend
        I am checking for any mistakes if I have done

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        1. I don’t know but it never works

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            1. Noooo ji not in my account

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          1. I have checked it several times

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          2. Pl you check and let me know

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      2. Ranjeeta I did a spelling mistake
        Now rectified
        Pl check again 😜

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        1. And I m jyo not Ranjeeta 😡😫😅

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  6. Bachpan ki yaadein taaza kardi

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    1. Thanks Supreet , good morning how r u ? Hope all well 🙂

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  7. Bahut dukh hota hai in sannaton mein , kash door ho ye kbi 😐

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    1. Ye sannatei hum hi ne toh kiye hain .. kahan hain hum ? Humare bacche .. hum whatsap facebook mein toh humare bacche kahan honge ? Humne hi toh ye seekh di hai aur dukh bhi hume hi , unhone toh dekha hi nahin toh dukh kaahe ka .. fir jab swayam ne jala buna to fansne ka dukh kyun ?

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      1. Haa 😐 sahi kaha apne

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  8. majestic effort and may be a better view, different from the most

    2017-05-08 23:33 GMT+05:30 bhaatdaal :

    > bhaatdal posted: “वो छतों की डोलियाँ जिन्हें फलंगते थे कभी पतंग लूटने को
    > .. वो गलियाँ आज सूनी पड़ी हैं , बस बची हैं वो बारियाँ वो दरवाज़े , वो लोह
    > लक्कड़ .. सब घरों में दुबकें हैं TV कम्प्यूटर , whatsap , खेल भी indoors
    > खेलने वाले भी IN doors.. वो कारक नीम की निम्बो”
    >

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    1. Thanks a tonne 🙂 for the compliment and visit both 🙂

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      1. its hunger which need food, food cares not

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        1. Wow , Thanks 🙂

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