Love you

Shining bright ,up in the sky,

one in the millions,

so precious ,

a love so true,

from me to you,

Songs of angels ,

Blessing of grace,

Need of Life,

To me are you …


All this he said .. 

He said he loved,

He said he cared,

But rage inside,

Slowly flared,

In the corner,

Reminiscing 

His words ,

I can’t believe,

I never thought,

He wI’ll leave,

Like a dream.. Nivedita


*photos by Google 

29 responses to “Love you”

  1. beautifully written jyotsna:-)

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  2. It’s an open ended question.. You composed in a touchy way

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    1. I am an admirer of your work , read your work on Mahesh and Bunny ‘s blog . Thank you soooooooo much :):)

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    1. Thank you Rajat 🙂 you are a gift to my blog 501th follower :):) thank you for the follow 🙂

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      1. That so nice of you ❤

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        1. :):) its so nice of u for the follow :):)

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  3. Its beautiful 👌💙

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      1. You’re welcome 🙂

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  4. your poems are treat to soul jyo 🙂

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    1. 😍😊Friends see from a different angle , they don’t judge by words they judge by feelings, That’s the reason you always end up only and only appreciating 🙂 thanks for being here 🙂

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      1. Criticism is easy . appreciation keeps us more motivated and ur work is always praise worthy jyo

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    1. Thank you , much appreciated:)

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  5. The serene flow of words and emotions shouldn’t have ceased…..
    Expecting a befitting reciprocal answer from Pawan ji for this creation.

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    1. Aaah thanks , but such emotional quests have no answers, somehow even stars ✨ can’t as they only know to light at night and vanish in the day , like the dreams stays all night and gone with the dawn . ☺️

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      1. Ek aur Lajawab baat keh di

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    1. Thanks 🙂 I am so glad you read every post and motivate me , gratitude for your kindness. 🙂

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      1. Actually I can’t stop myself if someone write such beautiful posts 🙏

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        1. Thanks for the appreciation

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  6. wow…diii it was really touchyyy..simply awesome..<3

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    1. Thanks lil wonder , seekh rai hun tumse thoda thoda ab mein bhi , your val day wala post was amazing like amazinishi:):)

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      1. Are di m sikhti aapse.. love u di

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