Far far away #2💜💗💞



It is love , when I set you free,

and you say” NO, be with me 💑

Though, I know what you said ,

Was all so unreal ,u said just to say,

You thinking of keeping troubles away,

Trust me! I am going and will never come,

To trouble you or blocking your way ,

My love for you is growing day by day ,

It is sacred and true that’s why i crave ,

Deep kisses, longing hugs, and I lay

Lonely all night alone in my bed ,

Dreaming you with my open open eyes,

From Miles away , Far Far away.. nivedita

46 responses to “Far far away #2💜💗💞”

  1. Very nicely penned, loved this.

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    1. Thanks a tonne words from friends like you all keep me going . I am glad you loved it .. 🙂

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  2. Happy new year Di 😊

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    1. Happppie New year Bhai I hope this year brings you back 😊with new spirit .. I m fine n now better heard from you . Plz keep buzzing bro

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      1. thank you so much Di… love you :*

        and for new spirit, i have to leave the existing one 😛 lol kidding ha 😉

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        1. Toh aise mar mar ke jeene se marke jeena accha .. ek bar is spirit ko marke nayi spirit le aa .. Tu nai to koi aur sahi aur nahin koi aur sahi

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          1. haha Di 😀 , you are inspiring me to think like this :

            Pyar karo bass ek ko,
            dil-o-dimag se jo nek ho,,

            aur jab tak na mile aisa koyi,
            try karte raho har ek ko,, !! 😉 😛

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            1. Woi toh .. dekha just few words inspired u so be alive and be in touch dekhna very soon u will b back .. lol 😀kabhi na kabhi to milegi

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              1. Thank you so much for making me smile always Di 😀😀…

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                1. Always welcome bhai keep smiling and always keep your spirit high

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                  1. trying always Di 🙂 , sometimes got fail but won’t leave the hope 😀

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  3. Gracias ! That’s what I can only comment . Are you in love with ‘ nature ‘ too ? I know your passion of cooking , cooking Blogs , writing Reviews & what not . Your blog readers ‘ love ‘ you . Please don’t take my comments in the wrong ‘ way ‘ .

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    1. I am overwhelmed with the words of appreciation , thank you and why shall I take it otherwise I am so lucky to receive love from you all.☺☺yes I love nature , mother nature is where i find peace, I have born n lived half of my life in the exotic beauty of East which i am missing now … I love photography and almost all the pictures used by me in the blog and twitter are clicked by me and edited too by myself .. ☺☺

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      1. I seen Guwahati , Dibrugarh , Jorhat , Sibsagar , Imphal , Kohima , Shillong , Namati Ghat , Dimapur , Majali Island . Did you see all these place Jyotsana Madam .

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        1. yu call me jyo or novedita no madam plz ..

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        2. Sir where have u been , we are all worried .. without you twitter is silent

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          1. Jyotsana , my twitter account has been blocked . The problem will get solved when I am back to my home town . I am unable to unlock my twitter account account , because my mobile does not get the messages from India . My Mobile is as old as me . Thanks for the concern .

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  4. very beautiful poem11 its so deep… 😦

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      1. your most welcome 🙂

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  5. What an example of unconditional love, separation, pain and fondness. Each word striking deep in the heart. Awesome Jo!

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    1. Sacchi?? I wrote it randomly i never knew you will like it, glad to read these words of appreciation. ☺☺thanku so much

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      1. Haan sachhi! Pleasure 😊

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              1. Okay I’ll believe you…

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                1. No option you have to

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  6. अति उत्तम

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    1. A compliment from a wonderful writer wow !! Likhna safal hua .. do read my Blogger of the week series , Hope u like it too ..

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      1. I will. After quitting social media, I am reading and Writing Blogs only !

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        1. Woah Quittinv Social Media why?

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          1. Giving time to blogger. No social media influence. It really helps!

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            1. Wah kya soch hai.. bow to u

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  7. ‘Allo Jyots! Happy New Year!

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    1. Hi , To u too ..☺

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      1. Where have you been hiding?

        Coming to KBags this month

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        1. Do tell me just dont fix on 16 n 17th other days u r welcome

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          1. Oof! I was planning the 16th. But, now will probably plan for the 18th morning

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            1. Yeas plz gm hope to see u soon

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  8. So painful yet beautiful

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    1. Thankyou so much for appreciating the pain . Not every one can ..

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