क्या बात है !

किताबों के पन्ने पलटते  हुए  सोचती हूं 

यूहीं पलट जाये जिंदगी , तो क्या बात है !


तमन्ना जो पुरी हो ख्वाब मे,

वो हकिकत बन जाये तो क्या बात है !


मतलब के लिए तो सब ढुंढते है मुझे,

बिना मतलब के कोई ढुंढे तो क्या बात है !


जो शरीफ़ों की शराफत में न हो बात,

वो एक शराबी कह जाये तो क्या बात है !


कत्ल करके तो कोई भी ले जायेगा दिल मेरा      

मिठी बातों से कोई ले जाये तो क्या बात है !


जो वो तनहाइयों को ना समझे तो क्या बात,

हम चिल्ला कर ख़ामोशियों को कह गए ये हुई बात !


कहने को जब कुछ बचा नहीं तो क्या ..

शोर ख़ामोशियों का सुन जाए तो क्या बात है । ..निवेदिता

39 responses to “क्या बात है !”

  1. वाह जी वाह

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    1. शुक्रिया

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  2. Bhut hi umda humesa ki tarah

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        1. Wish you and your Family a very Happy New Year Pal

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          1. आपको और आपके परिवार को नववर्ष 2017 की हार्दिक शुभकामनाएं ll ईश्वर से यही कामना है कि आने वाला प्रत्येक नया दिन आपके जीवन में अनेकानेक सफलताएँ एवं अपार खुशियाँ लेकर आए ll Happy new year 👌👍

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            1. Thank you truly 🙂

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  3. बेहद खूबसूरत रचना

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  4. Waah waah
    Kya baat Kya baat
    Dil Ko chhoo Gai apke Dil ki baat
    Khamoshiyo mai bhi sab Kuch keh Gai apki baat
    Sukoon hai ek meetha sa
    Suroor hai
    Kuch aisi hai apki baat.

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    1. Wooowwe Neha thank u thank u .. bahut meethi baat .. itne protsahan me liye much much love 😊

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  5. Too good , koi mujhe bhi ye hunar dila de
    To kya baat hai..

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    1. Oh wow if you are saying this then it is for sure a compliment for me

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      1. It’s compliment for you.

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        1. Thank you Nishthurji

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  6. I’m lost in last words or I’m last in lost words, trying to decipher the echoes. Awesome as always Jo.

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    1. You are lost somewhere I don’t know where , when everyone sleeps you wakeup, where lost nobody knows , I just wish to get the vibrant old you

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      1. Hehehehe old is what I have got now

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  7. Mesmerising. Beautifully written. 👍😊

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    1. Thank you Namrata .. thankyou for stopping and liking 🙏

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  8. क्या बात क्या बात ……
    दिल की वो बातें जिसको कई बार शब्द मिल नही पाते वो आवाज आप जो लिखते हो उन में स्प्ष्टत नज़र आती है …..
    😊🙏🏼

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    1. Your motivation keep me going , thanks a tonne for your kind words

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      1. God bless you always (:

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        1. 🙏wish the same by his grace

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  9. Aisa lagta hai ki zindagi panno me simat ke reh gayi hai. -A pain of a student! Hehe. Just a line from my old lame poem.
    By the way, I loved this poem. ♥♥

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    1. Bahut sunder lines hain Ananya 😊 aap jaisi choti choti kayivatriyon se milkar motivation milta hai , hum apne aapko sukshm pate hain aaplogon ki pratibha ke agei. .. sadhuwad aapko .. keep writing and stay blessed ☺

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      1. Awwh. Thanks you so very much Ma’am; for the divine blessings. ❤

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    1. Thank you for stopping by , whenever I will get time I will visit your blog soon

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      1. 😂😂 sure when you feel much free that time you can check out my small efforts

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  10. क्या बात है ! ज्योत्सना जी ! काश हम भी आपके तरह एक कवि होते !

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    1. Thank you so much sir, your words always motivates me :)and keep me going

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        1. Thank you , rajni ji 😊

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