कांति

चेहरे पे लाल सुर्ख लाली ,

कांति मानो सूर्य की ,
महनत की बूँदें टपकती हुई ,
प्यास नज़रों में बाकी,
कशिश भागते हुए क़दमों की,
प्रतिबिम्भ चंचल मृग की,
बौराया सा घूम रहा ,
खोज कस्तूरी की बाकी। … ” निवेदिता “

41 responses to “कांति”

  1. चेहरे पर ठहरी थी कुछ देर ही तो किरणें,
    पल वो कैद कर लिया ताउम्र के लिए मैंने!!

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    1. सूंदर पंक्तियां हैं .. धन्यवाद

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  2. सुंदर रचना

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    1. धन्यवाद पढ़ने और सराहने दोनों के लिए

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    1. Thank you for reading and appreciating

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  3. Too good. Can’t explain.

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    1. Thank you bunny how r u bhai ?

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          1. hows you 🙂 and don’t repeat my answer please :p

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            1. always happy 🙂 miss ur jokes bhai

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                1. y u need to miss come back 🙂

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                    1. koi bat nai here u r 🙂

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                      1. But you forgot me, like others.. can’t complaint about others but you said you are my sis 😔..

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                        1. I never did ask Arti

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                        2. she has your number I never had, how to connect, and truth is no one ever forgotten u .. though I am not the part of that group any more , everybody inclusive of Ishi, Raman , Hem and pritu keep missing u n asked ur num. many a times, I dont connect and if i do I never forget

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                          1. I know Di 🙂 I am sorry i was a bit depressed so i said that you forget me, please don’t mind my words. Love You Di 🙂

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                        3. my brother trust me I am always there for u in prayers

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  4. Gosh …you look like a little water nymph ( fairy) in that photo …I want to wrap you in a great big towel and give you a nice warm cup of tea 🙂

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    1. hi fijay which pic u r talking about

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      1. The one with this post of you stood near the ocean looking freezing cold with wet hair ….it’s actually a lovely pic but I want to wrap you in a great big towel and warm you up:D:D

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    2. hey dear the comment is so so sweet but strange it is I dont know which pic is visible to you as I have not uploaded any :p and is not visible to me either :):) ..but thank you for the beautiful loving words 🙂 touched I am :):)

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      1. ? Gosh that is so weird

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  5. Hey jyostna.. So meaningful post.. Bahot khoob

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    1. thankyou ji 🙂 thanks for reading 🙂

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      1. Main to aapki post padhne ke liye wait karta rehta hu humesha

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  6. चन्द शब्दों में बहुत कुछ कह दिया,
    बहुत खूब ज्योत्सना जी.

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    1. Hey Rajiv thanks 🙂

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  7. वाह !! बहुत खूब।

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    1. Rekha thank you dear , read your Nachiketa on indiblogger amazing it was

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      1. You Are welcome 😊😊

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