First Kiss

Around , all around 

the dark night ,
dreaming of ur first kiss,
the passion in my eyes ,
reflecting in yours ,
your hands all over ,
your chest touching mine, 
holding my face ,
you kissed and kissed ,
my eyes were closing , 
control over senses ,
was all now yours ,
I was all yours,  and, 
you were all mine .
the gleam of moonlight,
on the corner of my bed ,
covered us like the gloomy sheet ,
your lips ran down touching my neck,
crazy I go when I look back….
now all alone ,wounded 
longing for your love 
it pains and grows unbearably,
your words fall against my aching heart,
and darkly my love running in vain,
drops to the cold , uncaring bed, 
my soul falls upon,
uncaring, tears in my eyes ,
In a haze of Shock !
I call your name,
while my dreams take me ,
to the dark all around ,
where we first hugged ,
and reached the bliss ,
where we first met ,
and you first kissed . ….”Nivedita”
waiting for you , hoping 
we meet again,
dwelling in each other 
hugged , we again Kiss. .. :* 🙂

56 responses to “First Kiss”

  1. Jyotsana Mam ! I read most of your posts ! How did I miss this one ! 🤓🤓🤓🤓 !

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    1. You have not read तेज़ाब and Acid attacks yet . Please do read and tweet it spread the message , no one better than you can do this.

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  2. दर्द में डूबी

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  3. What should I say. I have no words. It’s ecstatically romantic. Beautiful.

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      1. 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊

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  4. Very well expressed 🙂

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    1. Thank you for stopping by Kavita

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      1. Welcome 🙂

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    1. thank you sudhir its a pleasure to have a word from u , how r u ?

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      1. Hey Jyotna…How have you been. long time….Glad to re-connect. best wishes for diwali.

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        1. hi sudheer same here , a pleasure to see you , hope you well, have a happy Green Diwali to you

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          1. Apologies I did not wish you on your birthday. I remembered it was around September 3 ….Belated birthday wishes, Jyotsana.

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            1. thank you so much plz no apologies, m greatful . best wishes

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  5. Very well kitted in heavy emotional words !! 👌

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    1. thanks a tonne Radhika 🙂

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  6. Hmmm…very romantic poem…must be romantic like u

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    1. 🙂 thats so sweet of you dear .. beauty lies in the eyes of the beholder

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  7. बहुत खूब ढेरों दाद क़बूल करें ज्योत्सना जी.

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    1. sadar dhanyawaad Sagarji 🙂

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      1. Shukriya Jyotsana ji,
        ‘ इतनी इज़्ज़त ना बक्षिए,जिस के क़ाबिल नहीं’सागर’.!
        गरूर इतना आ जाए की,खुद को भूल ही जाए’सागर’.!! ‘

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        1. bahut khoob Sagarji 🙂

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  8. Very sweet kiss..

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    1. Thank you Rajiv , how r u ?

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  9. ~pritu_an_explorer~ Avatar
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    Amazing 😍😍😍

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  10. Beautiful kiss Jyotsna😉😃

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  11. Ohhhh jyo .. Very sensual and beautiful.. I could feel every bit of it..

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    1. Thanks Suprit 🙂 🙂

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  12. In a haze of Shock !

    I call your name,

    while my dreams take me ,

    to the dark all around ,

    I really appreciate those lines. The mystic they create is wow.

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    1. Thanks a tonne , I am glad you said this , As I am not a regular writer in English , just tried ..:)

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      1. It’s pretty good actually. I am exploring Hindi these days. Wrote my first poem recently. aajkibaat is the title.

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        1. wow I will read it , :):) I started writing english Poems since I was eight yrs old, gradually Hindi started attracting me and I had a bend towards it.

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          1. I also like Hindi, but doesn’t have inspiration to write. Any good Hindi poems in Hindi literature you can suggest ?

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            1. please read Mahadevi Verma, Dinkar, Nirala, Pant

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              1. I will read and write more. Thanks for information. 😊

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                1. google Kavitakosh and you can read N number of Kavya rachna from the wonderful writers ..

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  13. What beautiful description of emotions, truly sensational. Epitome of love. Mesmerizing and nostalgic. Awesome as always.

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    1. Thanks a lot , apko pata hai angrezi mein zara hath tang hai , bas ek koshish hai..

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  14. this is really vivid.. 🙂 wonderful read.

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    1. Thanks a tonne 🙂 How nice to have words of support from you 🙂

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      1. you’re welcome 🙂 🙂

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  15. very beautiful 🙂
    full of emotions 🙂

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    1. Thank you Rahul, :):)

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