फूल 

जब मैं मौन हूँ तो गौण नहीं ,कहीं विस्मृत हूँ शायद 

शायद, इन हवाओं में , इन फ़िज़ाओं में कहीं 

कहीं ,इन फूलों में तो नहीं ? या फिर शायद हाँ 

हाँ !इन फूलों में, जहाँ शब्द हार जाएँ फूल बोलते हैं


बोलते हैं श्रीमान ! ज़ुबान से नहीं रंगों से अपने

अपने महक से , सौंदर्य से मिठास से,


मीठास से रस घोलते हैं , ठग लेते हैं काले भ्रमर को 
भ्रमर को आसक्त करते है , की वो उनमें खो जाये 

जाये तो कहाँ जाये , लट्टु इस चर्म तक की न जाने 

जाने -अनजाने ,कब शाम ढल जाए और वह,

वह ,पगला ! उन फूलों की महक में डूबा अपने प्राण खो दे .. 

 “निवेदिता ”


#सिंह अवलोकन छँद  # photography # Nature 

43 responses to “फूल ”

  1. Foolon ka varnan bhi koi bhala itni sundarta se Kare ye sirf aap Kar sakti hain jyo ..

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    1. Hahaha satvein asmaan pe hun … on the seventh cloud now and if you keep appreciating like this I will be on the Ninth soon .. you and Swapnil made my day today ..

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      1. Swapnillllll arey woh to bahot achi hain . apki tarah uska vichar bhi bahot alag hain .. Im lucky that I got u both as friends.. 🙂

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        1. yeah She is a sweetheart .. we are friends and met on WP . She writes wonderful and she has started a website please spread it in your circle just go and click on her blog . please do it for her 🙂 I request and share it with your friends as well

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          1. I’m following her blog since long time . ye koi kehne ki baat hain.. I wil do it..
            Anything for u both

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            1. 🙂 thanks a tonne 🙂

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              1. Thanks ??? Nai jagah nai hain jyotsna ..

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                1. hahaha Bus mein conductor ki jagah humesha rehti hai waise hi manav swabhaw main dhanyawaad ki

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                  1. Apnon ko dhanyawaad kya kehna.. Jo hukum mere aka.. 🙂

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  2. अब फूल नही मुस्कराते हैं
    मुरझाए से पाए जाते है
    प्रदूषण की मार में करहाते हैं
    भ्रमर भी अब कहां पाए जाते है
    शहर अब इमारतों के जंगल से नजर आते हैं ।

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    1. कटु सत्य है , पर छोटी छोटी कोशिश हम सभी करें तो शायद थोड़ा कुछ बचाया जा सकता है , ऐसा मेरा मनमाना है व मेरी आशा भी है । ब्लॉग पढ़ने के लिए आपका धन्यवाद 🙂
      जितना बच गया है
      उन्हें बचाए रखने की
      उम्मीद फिर भी क़ायम है ,
      स्वप्न माना कठिन हैं
      पर विश्वास है
      फूल पत्थर के जंगल से खिलाए जाएँगे
      भरमार आज भ्रम ही सही
      कल फिर गुंजन गाएँगे …

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      1. आपका अभिनंदन है।

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      2. न हूं निराश
        न ही हताश
        पर हकीकत में जीता हूं,
        नहीं कोई स्वपन या काश

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  3. It is so beautiful. Well done:-)

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    1. Thanks a tonne Amit , as usual i say it again it is my pleasure to read the support from u my friend , just keep visiting often 🙂 🙂 , Happy Teej

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      1. Happy teej to you too:-)

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  4. Wah wah
    …majestic is one word…my fav… Ur Hindi poems

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    1. Thank you Swapnil you and your words always motivate me .. Love u mate

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  5. Dono phulon ko ek sath ,dekh kar mubarak baad dene ka man ho raha hai 😊

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    1. Haha.. Bahut khoob shabdon ka maya jaal 🙂 haunsla badhanw ke liye सहर्ष dhanyawad , bahut dino bad nazar aana hua aapka ? Hope all well

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      1. Lol I am back after many months, but so engrossed now that enjoying the company of the people around. I am absolutely fine.

        Special thanks for asking about me. Yeah I am doing well.

        You have grown up as awesome blogger in between. Glad for your progress.

        Glad you are enjoying blogging world.

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        1. Please keep visiting love to read your words and have you on my blog , it motivates me to have a splendid writer like you 🙂 you are amazing writer .. Happy blogging to u too pal .. Keep visiting , reading , guiding and keep sharing your thoughts . 🙂

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          1. Thanks , I will keep visiting.

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  6. ज्योत्सना जी बहुत दिनों बाद आपकी रचना पढ़ने को मिल रही है,
    सदैव की माफिक सुंदर और ज़ज़्बाती,बहुत खूब.

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    1. Thanku Sagarji , haunslaafzai ke liye aabhaar

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      1. Jo Sahi Hai Wahi Likh/Kaha Hai Jyotsana ji.

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  7. The words are as beautiful and soothing as the flowers ❤ And, what a coincidence, I've posted a flower picture a while ago… 🙂

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    1. Thanks Mani 🙂 your words always matter .. Thanks for stopping appreciating , and motivating dear .

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    1. आभार , पढ़ने और समय निकालने के लिए बहुत बहुत Abhaar

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  8. This is such a beautiful piece to read and the pictures add to its beauty! Great work ♡👍

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    1. Hey Antra thank you so much , glad u liked and thank you for eeading and visiting keep coming 🙂

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  9. “sang chle, sang pale…dhup-chhaanv dono”

    bs ess jaisi khubsurat poem likhi hai. shbdo ka mail apke unche vyktitav ko darsha rha hai. khoob likha ji.

    your student:
    shanejeet 🙂

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    1. I am blessed to read the praises from u please take care of ur helth and keep moving .. Wish u all the very best in life and stay blessed 🙂

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  10. Very nice writing. 👍

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    1. Thank u manish 🙂

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  11. Reading again and again and again. Superb majestic awesome.

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    1. Thank you ji , nature is inspiration:)

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