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Reflections 

Your face reflects in my eyes ,

Your smile glows on my face,

Your presence smiles on my lips ,

Your desires carresses my mind ,

Your fragrance arouses my heart,

Your love reflects in  mine …


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  1. Miracle :) Avatar
    Miracle :)

    Hey !
    You have a beautiful blog with beautiful thoughts. Thank you for following my blog 🙂
    I’m hosting Miracle Challenge, which is a weekly writing challenge using prompts for writing stories/ tiny tales and poems/haikus.
    Check out the latest writing prompts for Miracle Challenge Week -5 :

    “MiracleChallenge Week – 5” dated 12th – 18th July, 2016


    I’m sure all the prompts are inspiring this week and you will have fun writing them:D
    Looking forward to hear from you.
    Thank you !
    All the best !
    From,
    Miracle:)

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    1. bhaatdal Avatar
      bhaatdal

      Thanks for the follow and the challange i will try to keep up to ur expectations

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      1. Miracle :) Avatar
        Miracle :)

        My pleasure to follow you back ☺
        That’s great. Bring them. I’m sure you are good in writing them. Did you see the prompts? Hope the challenges are inspiring too 😇

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        1. bhaatdal Avatar
          bhaatdal

          I couldnt i will be doing it today thanks once again

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          1. Miracle :) Avatar
            Miracle :)

            No problem. Take your time ☺

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  2. Yashika Avatar
    Yashika

    Beautifully written!

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    1. bhaatdal Avatar
      bhaatdal

      Thank you for stopping by and appreciating 🙂

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      1. Yashika Avatar
        Yashika

        You’re most welcome! I’m glad that I came across your blog!

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        1. bhaatdal Avatar
          bhaatdal

          Sheer pleasure to have you here .. Stay blessed 🙂

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          1. Yashika Avatar
            Yashika

            Thank you!

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  3. Tanay style's Avatar
    Tanay style’s

    Lovely…

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  4. Fatma Amin Avatar
    Fatma Amin

    Lovely poetry . As the saying goes , “A poem begins in delight & ends in wisdom ” . I can feel the same in your poetry. Thanks for sharing it !

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    1. bhaatdal Avatar
      bhaatdal

      I am so so glad you like it , than you for the appreciation and the humility. Thanks for stopping by. 🙂 🙂 🙂

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  5. Joker Shayar Avatar
    Joker Shayar

    Beautiful Di 😊

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    1. bhaatdal Avatar
      bhaatdal

      Oh thank you bunny 🙂 beautiful poem or di ?? Decide first .. 😉

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      1. Joker Shayar Avatar
        Joker Shayar

        both are 🙂 my beautiful di writes beautiful words :))

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        1. bhaatdal Avatar
          bhaatdal

          Wow wat a compliment and i think in the right column 🙂 not by mistake

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          1. Joker Shayar Avatar
            Joker Shayar

            i try not to do much mistakes Di 🙂 en in this case it was there in right place 😉

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            1. bhaatdal Avatar
              bhaatdal

              Tu kahan hai bunny plz aaja 😦

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              1. Joker Shayar Avatar
                Joker Shayar

                Yahin hu main Di ..apke paas :))

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                1. bhaatdal Avatar
                  bhaatdal

                  Thanks bhai

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                  1. Joker Shayar Avatar
                    Joker Shayar

                    :))

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              2. Joker Shayar Avatar
                Joker Shayar

                Mujhe bulane wale khud chhup gaye hain :((

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                1. bhaatdal Avatar
                  bhaatdal

                  Monday tak break liya hai

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                  1. Joker Shayar Avatar
                    Joker Shayar

                    Okay Di… Hope everything’s fine at your side 😊

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                    1. bhaatdal Avatar
                      bhaatdal

                      Alls well wat about u all bunny

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                    2. Joker Shayar Avatar
                      Joker Shayar

                      All is well Di 😊

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            2. bhaatdal Avatar
              bhaatdal

              :):) thanks bro

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              1. Joker Shayar Avatar
                Joker Shayar

                :))

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        2. bhaatdal Avatar
          bhaatdal

          Bhai u r untraceable plz reply hopw u ok ?

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          1. Joker Shayar Avatar
            Joker Shayar

            I am ok Di 🙂 hwz uh

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            1. bhaatdal Avatar
              bhaatdal

              Just like you are

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              1. Joker Shayar Avatar
                Joker Shayar

                I never wish you to be like me … Stay blessed :))

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                1. bhaatdal Avatar
                  bhaatdal

                  I can understand and thats why said just like u .. 🙂

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                  1. Joker Shayar Avatar
                    Joker Shayar

                    Idk what to say Di :)… God bless you with all happiness health and peace 😊😊..

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                    1. bhaatdal Avatar
                      bhaatdal

                      Same to u bhai

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                    2. Joker Shayar Avatar
                      Joker Shayar

                      :))

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                    3. bhaatdal Avatar
                      bhaatdal

                      How r u bhai ? I really do miss u ,

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                    4. Joker Shayar Avatar
                      Joker Shayar

                      I am good di.. how r u..and i know you missed me…atleast some persons in the virtual world can do that 😀😀

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                    5. bhaatdal Avatar
                      bhaatdal

                      So what it is a virtual world but ur existence is there in my heart and I m sorry if u feel that way but I truly mean it , ..

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                    6. Joker Shayar Avatar
                      Joker Shayar

                      Diiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii,,, I didnt mean that you are faking it :(… i meant i feel blessed to find you in this virtual world. Though i’m not acting like a good bro to you :P, but i know you understand me :).. Love you

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  6. Chandni Asnani Avatar
    Chandni Asnani

    Ahaan! Those are really adorable lines! Loved it. 😇

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    1. bhaatdal Avatar
      bhaatdal

      Thanks chandni my firefly .. Keep lightening the dark

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      1. Chandni Asnani Avatar
        Chandni Asnani

        Yes, I will! 😇✌

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        1. bhaatdal Avatar
          bhaatdal

          🙂

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  7. Rajiv Avatar
    Rajiv

    Nice one, Jyots!

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    1. bhaatdal Avatar
      bhaatdal

      Thanks Rajiv

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  8. anjalimeow Avatar
    anjalimeow

    I m so into love poetry nowadays…
    beautiful poem… use of words ❤ awesome

    btw, had the part 2 of dance with the devil, hope you will like it 😉

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    1. bhaatdal Avatar
      bhaatdal

      Thank you Anjali for reading and liking 🙂

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  9. Fijay Avatar
    Fijay

    Lovely poem …and that photograph is kind of dream like and beautiful …it looks like ‘love’ to me :):):):)

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    1. bhaatdal Avatar
      bhaatdal

      Thank you so much dear for stopping by , I am glad u like it

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  10. extinct0703 Avatar
    extinct0703

    Beautiful words, wonderfully expressed and an awesome photo. May God bless you both🙏😇😊

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    1. bhaatdal Avatar
      bhaatdal

      Thank u

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      1. extinct0703 Avatar
        extinct0703

        Welcome 🙂

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        1. bhaatdal Avatar
          bhaatdal

          :):)

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    2. bhaatdal Avatar
      bhaatdal

      I am obliged to read the words of appreciation from you, but I am waiting to read something from your pen ..

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      1. extinct0703 Avatar
        extinct0703

        Eish! It’s so hot here the ink dried down of the pen.

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        1. bhaatdal Avatar
          bhaatdal

          I can say the same , it is so hot here tooo ..

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          1. extinct0703 Avatar
            extinct0703

            Likha kal, check kijiyega

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            1. bhaatdal Avatar
              bhaatdal

              I will do very soon

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              1. extinct0703 Avatar
                extinct0703

                🙂

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  11. anaghamurali Avatar
    anaghamurali

    lovely poem

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    1. bhaatdal Avatar
      bhaatdal

      Thanks Anagha for stopping dear

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