Glow of hope 


With a deep breath , tears rolling down her cheeks, crying for her shattered dreams, Dreams she had for all her life,Dreamt with the kholed eyes  today seems all smudged …

Knocking ,he came .. when she was broke,she opened her arms and welcomed his heart,  she started believing the true lies , comforting herself with his smiles ….

World changed , Rainbow of happiness all around .. Scared she she started living again , dying heart breathing again.. 


Fate played the dirty game .. Once again .. 
She started questioning to herself yet not loosing her spirit and faith .., who was she to him ? Or now who is she ?

 She asked herself again and again .. 
Who I am ? What I am ? I am , I want to be ,

 Or say , I am what I am … 

I am an escapist .. 

Escaping  the truth .. 

I am a learner , learning the myths .. 

I am a dreamer ,dreaming beneath …

dreaming long day all night .. 

Am I Good ? Good for nothing ,.. 

I am a Breeze of Sighs !!

Tired of trying mystical tries 

Iam a needy in need of love ,

I am greedy, in greed of you..

I am beautiful , just a myth…

I am a cheater cheating on myself .. 


I am who I am .. 

I am a ball of hope, in your goal , 

A line of words , as a whole ..

A call on hold , story untold

I am A Failure, trying to succeed , 
fake success growing old ,

The darkness in Life under the lamp,

Walking at night on the lonely slope

holding the lamp faith and hope 

Hoping to light the Silent eyes luring faith .. 

I am the fall from untied rope …

I am the Face of Pain ,

with the glow of Hope …. “Nivedita”

53 responses to “Glow of hope ”

  1. I loved how beautifully you described the situation, how she questioned and doubted herself, how she was so suppressed under her overpowering state of mind that she underestimated herself all the time, you described it perfectly.
    But at the end, she also has a hope, I loved the ending! Completely magical! 😃😃❤

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    1. She is someone just like you mystical and magical .. The twilight fairy .. A tinker bell .. 🙂 thankyou

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      1. Hehe, yeah actually I didn’t want to say that, I felt a bit connected to that girl, lost, negative, hopeless, and unsure, but I’d love to be that positive girl she became finally! 😊😊😊✌

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        1. You are and always trust in yourself.. Be kind and have courage

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          1. That’s what I want to have! Thanks Ma’am, I’m trying hard! 😅

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  2. Amazing piece of words!! Every aspect of life summed up in this piece..

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    1. Thanku , such words of motivation keeps me going .. Thanku for stopping,.. 🙂

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      1. Glad to visit this world!! Happy blogging 🙂

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        1. Same to u .. I would love to read your writings very soon .. On Tuesday might a lil busy till then .. Thanks for stopping by once again .. :*

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  3. Beautiful it is..this lines “I am the Face of Pain” held me numb for minutes..:)

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    1. Oh thats a great word of appreciation. Thankyou for visiting and the kind words .. May I know the name of the stranger 🙂

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      1. Few voice in my surrounding call me ‘Manoj’

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        1. Oh thanks Manoj now i have a name for the voice to call .. Thanku once again

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  4. The love,longing,quest,existence,struggle, and a hope…All pretty prevalent in this post…kudos

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    1. Thanku pal .. Your words means a lot to me .. It encourages me to write more .. Thanks a tonne :*

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  5. M a learner learning the myth..m a dreamer dreaming beneath. …beautiful lines

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    1. Thank you you gorgeous self ..

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  6. Well it is good work. I saw a lot of potential in you from some of the quizzicle stuff, thought provoking which you used to deposit and run in the beginning. I feel, perhaps mistakenly that this shows a better deal of you than those prod droppings you would provide back then. But I could be wrong, perhaps it was there all along, I just did not know it. Well this piece is so wise, so honest, so inclusive. I don’t believe any questing heart would find this piece without self search, questioning of their product in life and love.

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    1. Wow !! Wise men praising , i feel so delighted and happy cant express short of words .. Keep guiding like this always , it keeps me moving .. Thanku angel

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      1. You’re throwing a lot of smoke my way, cause by now I have two posts up and you have not read a one. lol

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        1. I am about to read as my internet was also like me coming and going 🙂 my next step is to read your posts and tuck myself in bed .. 🙂 thankyou for the smokey support .. 🙂 you guide me like a real critic and always in wait for your review.. You were the first one to comment on my posts and i always cherish your support. 🙂

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          1. Don’t break my heart, delinquent (lol)

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            1. Hehehe .. Read all Sire .. All wonderful as your heart . As wise as you are

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              1. Thank you, thank you, now clear the stage, ahem

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          2. You know, I apologize for all the folk who should have commented on your posts and didn’t. But look, today you have a bigger following than I and more comments

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  7. Impressive 🙂 I think there is a typo “Escaping” in line. “Eacaping the truth ..”

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    1. Thankyu for rectifying i will edit it ..

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      1. I am also prone to typos and missing words most of tym.. Cheers 😀

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        1. Hehe !! I do it most of the time , thank you for helping . Cheers buddy

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          1. I usually mail to convey the mistakes. Becox I feel it is better that way to say than comment. 🙂 So it is better to take down my comment as it’s purpose is fulfilled 🙂

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  8. दर्द की व्यथा, सक्षम होने के बावजूद असहाय होने की व्यथा, सामाजिक कुंठाओं की सीमा ना लाँघ पाने की व्यथा, अपने आप की ख़ुद से होती सहज सी लड़ाई की व्यथा, ख़ुद को मारकर औरों को समर्पित करने की व्यथा का इस से बेहतर विवरण मैंने आज तक नहीं पढ़ा। अति उत्तम रचना के साथ प्रस्तुत चित्र एक अजब सा समा बाँधते हुए चलचित्र का अहसास दिलाते हैं, मानो सब सामने वास्तव में हो।
    बेहतरीन ज्योत्सना। अंग्रेज़ी के शब्द हासिल नहीं थे आज सो हिन्दी में लिख दिया।

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    1. Wah jawab mein mere pas shabd hi kam padgaye hein

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      1. Aisa ho hi nahi sakta! Aap jaisi behtareen kaviytari ke pass khazana bhara pada hai.

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    2. I am delighted to read your Hindi its as good as your english i am obliged to read this in the praise . Thank you 🙂

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      1. Hehehe kabhi kabhi mujhe Hindi ke daure padte hain tab main dhoondh kar ati asahniya shabdon ka prayog karta hoon 🙈

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        1. Ati asahniya ??? Hahahhaa accha he bhasha ke marod uthte hein matlab … Ati asahniya … Hahaha .. Lol

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          1. Hahaha din sudhar gaya mera, woh kehte hain na
            Ghar se masjid hai door, yoon kar le
            Kisi rote huye bachhe ko hansaya jaaye

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            1. Yahan rota hua baccha kaun he ??

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              1. Cited an example dear, need not go for the literal meaning, in short my day was successful as I had made you laugh whole heartedly 😉

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                1. Oh toh baccha mein thi .. Lol hehehe asahniya .. 🙂 just kidding lovely sher .. It proves you know urdu bhi .. Multilingual.. Cool

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                  1. Hahaha hope you’re not having laugh pangs today also recollecting the ‘Asahniya’ 😉
                    Nope I do not know to write or read Urdu, people I interact with are masters of Urdu so I pick up a couplet or two from what they use.

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  9. The eternal questions that have disturbed the minds of humankind, you’ve worded them beautifully. A wonderful prose poetry… 🙂

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    1. Thank you Mani , it is so delightful to read words of appreciation from you , It is motivating and encouraging . Thank you 🙂

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  10. Okay sharma_jyo my twitter handle

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  11. This is beautiful.
    You have written everything that a human being can nearly be in his lifetime.
    Short and poetic. Complete and meaningful. Quick and crisp. I perceive it as a soliloquy with your own self. I also see another angle as a monologue with another. Loved the way you have rhymed it to a flow.
    Amazing thought. These are roughly the dilemmas I go through when I sit aloof. Good Job !!

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    1. Inspired by your dark fire .. A random scribble longing to write from long .. Rhyming apne aap ho gai , i did not tried though .. Just a simple thought crabbing my mind.

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      1. Really? So darkness has started doing its magic on your too. 😉 Thats good news.
        Rhyming words in the flow… wah wah. I loved it 🙂
        And Im surprised to see you awake at this hour. 😀

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        1. I am hungry , having pizza ..growning .. btw delete these gossips from your comments lol !!

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          1. Take my number msgs fine

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