खुली पलकें 

Some loney nights, when we are exhausted , dream to sleep but coud’nt sleep. Eyes are tired ,body wants to rest . Mind but restless , no letting us sleep. Want to retire, feeling Tired, like a monkey in the rain and dead as Dodo , still no rest no peace ., 
Missing what? It is the real question , missing our loved ones living far far away . Seven oceans away , or Seven lives .. Answers are unquestionable 🙂 questions are unanswerable . I rest here ,letting the questions find their own answers… 

 with a small thought :
khuli palkon mein Raat palbhar mein guzar gayi ,khwabon ke galiyare se neend kahin ajnabi ho jaise.

खुली पलकों में रात पल भर में गुज़र गयी,

ख़्वाबों के गलियरे से नींद कहीं अजनबी हो जैसे .. “निवेदिता -Nivedita”

  
 

35 responses to “खुली पलकें ”

  1. बहुत बढ़िया 🙂

    “खुली पलकों में रात पल भर में गुज़र गयी,
    ख़्वाबों के गलियरे से नींद कहीं अजनबी हो जैसे”

    भूल तो गया हूँ उसे, पर आँख ये क्यूँ भर गयी,
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    ,
    पत्थर हुए दिल में कोई आह अब भी दबी हो जैसे,, !!

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    1. Bahut khoob , dhanyawaad

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    2. बहुत सुँदर ,भावों को शेर में व्यक्त करने के लिए आभार . इससे मेरी कृति की इज़्ज़त बढ़ी hai

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      1. शुक्रिया होंसला अफ़ज़ाई के लिए madame ,, वैसे डर डर के लिखा शेयर,, क्योंके कुछ लोग नाराज़ भी हो चुके मुझसे के हमारी पोस्ट पे अपना कचरा न ठूँसो 😝😛

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  2. Sounds like a pretty disturbed night, thoughtful nonetheless. Beauty in words. 😉

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    1. 🙂 away from my ten year old .. Couldnt sleep when she is away

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      1. You have a 10 year old? :0 I’ll try to believe that. lol
        On a serious note, its so sweet. I cannot really say I know how a mother feels

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        1. Yup ten year old and fifteen years of marriage .. Lol .. Hey no lol I take it as compliment and yes only a mother can know how it feels. I too knew the feeling when I earned her in my life . Debt of a mother is indebted ..

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          1. Thats the sweetest I have heard today. Im sure you are lucky. Happy mother- daughter ❤

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  3. Sounds like a pretty disturbed night, thoughtful nonetheless. Beauty in words 😉

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  4. Nind kahi ajnabee ho jaise!wah wah

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    1. Thank you dear 🙂

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  5. Oh man!what a beautiful piece.

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  6. Adore words here Nivedita. And the perfect ending 🙂

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    1. Thank you so much for the words of appreciation 🙂

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      1. You’re welcome 🙂

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  7. Did you get the answers?

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      1. I ll have to find myself

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    1. धन्यवाद 🙂

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      1. स्वागत है आपका जी.

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  8. Let your soul search for the answers in day time. Good night.

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    1. Hehe very fast and conclusive .. Easy to tweet .. Good night 🙂

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