गलतियों का पुलिंदा हूँ मैं ,
जैसी भी हूँ उमदा हूँ मैं,
ख्वाबों पे ही जिन्दा हूँ मैं ,
तुझे नहीं मोल मेरा तो गलती तेरी,
हुज़ूर हज़ारों में चुनिंदा हूँ मैं..

हां गलतियों का पुलिंदा हूँ मैं,
रोते के सहारे का कन्धा हूँ मैं,
आज तेरे गले का फंदा हूँ मैं,
मैं वही हूँ जिसे कहते न थकते थे,
ऐ हसीन तेरे कानों का बूंदा हूँ मैं …


माना गलतियों का पुलिंदा हूँ मैं,
मौला का रचा हुआ बन्दा हूँ मैं ,
अच्छा नहीं बहुत गन्दा हूँ  मैं,
गुनाह तेरा जो पर काट दिए मेरे,
नहीं तो उड़ता हुआ परिंदा हूँ मैं ।।… निवेदिता


34 thoughts on “गलतियां

      1. I wish I could, I went there hoping to find some English, after reading your support on another blog post of someone I admire (think it was Nisthur?). It looked like all was Hindi but liked the picture, felt I didn’t wish to leave not liking something. What do you mean, the noun story?

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          1. If you have the time, supply me the link and I will get to it sooner, unless it isn’t that old and buried in your archives. If this sounds a little “unacquainted”, it is because I’m a little ignorant on some methods to dig up stuff on the internet.

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                    1. I am amzed to read your praises and the effort made by you. I will surely read this poem and will try to improve .. Sincerely I am just an amateur writer who pour the feelings in words .. thank you so much for all your words though by mistake i deleted two comments also as i am new to this app on phone :(:( but truly your words and effort is quite motivating please keep doing it always . It is Grace of God that you find Love and guidance from a friend we dont even know . Thanku once again 🙂

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                    2. Wow, indeed you are a blessed individual. Open of heart. Thank you for such a good receptiveness. And I meant all which I wrote, you have a good deal of promise as a poet. Continue, especially to enjoy it.

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                    3. Your support and your kind words are very precious to me . As I used to write in english earlier and never collected my work and with the course of time I stopped writing , your words are very inspiring and I am glad I sent you the links .. thank you truly and keep visiting my blog . Regards JYOTSNA

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                    4. You are so geared, made to inspire commendation. Bless you. Continue in your sincerity. I’ve had a good life. God has led me out of brokenness to reception, perhaps the qualities you sense are the ones which are enabled out of that brokenness. Thank you, this is a two way street. I’m somewhat humbled by your appreciation.

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